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    dots Submission Name: And They Will Always Saydots
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    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsAnd They Will Always Saydots
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    They say it's college,
    a time of realizing the truth,
    that you are just one of many,
    you're struggles--nothing.

    They say hard work will get you far,
    a time of studying, of learning.
    that if you try, nothing is out of your grasp,
    but they grade you---failure.

    They say it's a form of life,
    of seeing what you could be,
    but watching dreams shatter,
    hit the ground---pieces.

    They say a lot of things,
    what a bunch of hypocrits,
    I call it college, I label it learning,
    and pray hardwork falls in somewhere.

    I am no failure.
    I am no shattered dream.
    I am more than that.




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      Oh, yay...I like this a lot.

    I think you did an awesome job.

    They say a lot of things,
    what a bunch of hypocrits,
    I call it college, I label it learning,
    and pray hardwork falls in somewhere.

    It does fall in...somewhere.

    Good luck with it...
    | Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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