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Nth Level

Author: manwithnoname
ASL Info:    18/M/Ontario
Elite Ratio:    5.84 - 314 /278 /117
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I don't know what this is. It's weird, but I wanted to post it anyways. Oh, by the way, read from the bottom up.

Nth Level

M A D N E S S !
A D N E S S/
D N E S S/
N E S S/
E S S/
S S/

Until it reached the nth level of
        upwards like insanity
It C

Submitted on 2007-10-20 20:30:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  not bad never read a poem from the bottom to the top before, very interesting piece,
| Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]
  Interesting use of formatting. I find it interesting that it can almost be read both ways, if you disregard punctuation (with the obvious exception of 'crept). I kinda wish you went further with this.
| Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ]
  I found the poem visually appealing and innovative. Seeing the n'th, I was thinking it was going to be a mathematical or computer-science related poem. I also found the use of the "/" strange-- perhaps you are using it as a computer programming operator. Overall, I liked the poem, because it sounds nice.
| Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by albery rinash | [ Reply to This ]
| Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ]
  whoa i seriously just sat here staring at this for oh i dont know,what seemed like hours (it was actually like three minutes) saying to myself,myself saying "what?"
buhdazz man sincerely buhdazz.
neato and other snazzy stuff and stuff.
very original,or at least i've never seen anything quite like it before.
| Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ]

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