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M A D N E S S ! A D N E S S/ D N E S S/ N E S S/ E S S/ S S/ S/ ! Until it reached the nth level of upwards like insanity t p e r It C Slowly, |
not bad never read a poem from the bottom to the top before, very interesting piece, gerry | Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ] | Interesting use of formatting. I find it interesting that it can almost be read both ways, if you disregard punctuation (with the obvious exception of 'crept). I kinda wish you went further with this. | | Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ] | I found the poem visually appealing and innovative. Seeing the n'th, I was thinking it was going to be a mathematical or computer-science related poem. I also found the use of the "/" strange-- perhaps you are using it as a computer programming operator. Overall, I liked the poem, because it sounds nice. | | Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by albery rinash | [ Reply to This ] | buhdazz. | 1 | Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ] | whoa i seriously just sat here staring at this for oh i dont know,what seemed like hours (it was actually like three minutes) saying to myself,myself saying "what?" | buhdazz man sincerely buhdazz. neato and other snazzy stuff and stuff. very original,or at least i've never seen anything quite like it before. buhdazz. 1 | Posted on 2007-10-20 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ] | |