Interesting use of formatting. I find it interesting that it can almost be read both ways, if you disregard punctuation (with the obvious exception of 'crept). I kinda wish you went further with this.
I found the poem visually appealing and innovative. Seeing the n'th, I was thinking it was going to be a mathematical or computer-science related poem. I also found the use of the "/" strange-- perhaps you are using it as a computer programming operator. Overall, I liked the poem, because it sounds nice.
whoa i seriously just sat here staring at this for oh i dont know,what seemed like hours (it was actually like three minutes) saying to myself,myself saying "what?"
buhdazz man sincerely buhdazz.
neato and other snazzy stuff and stuff.
very original,or at least i've never seen anything quite like it before.
buhdazz.
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Submission Name: Nth Level
