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    dots Submission Name: Good Lustdots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 60/129/99
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 97
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 347



    Description:
       Just some thoughts on love and how it is often confused with other deep emotions related to it.


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    dotsGood Lustdots
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    A foggy night.
    A shallow man.
    A new partner.
    A little scared.

    He takes it slow.
    He gives it good.
    She likes it rough.
    Can't help but moan.

    They shake.
    They Scream.
    They cry.
    They come.

    True.
    Love.
    Is't.
    Lust.




    Submitted on 2007-10-21 00:12:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'd pay for this one for sure. i feel exactly like those two V.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-11-09 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, i like what this says to me. It says that even though they can share that that doesnt mean theyre in love. I think its good because a lot of the people that have sex these days are doing it because its all about lust and physical attraction not because what they are feeling is actually caring and love for that person. I think you have done a wonderful imagery and flow and the whole thing.

    Bravo! keep up the good work!

    much love
    xoxo
    ~tainted~
    | Posted on 2007-10-22 00:00:00 | by tainted-faerie | [ Reply to This ]
      No, but lust is awfully fun.

    I like this a lot...

    It reminds me of a certain night in my not too distant past.

    You used very simple words and phrases to paint this picture, which is awesome...It's primal, and I love it.

    Awesome job!
    | Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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