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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsdont... dots
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    wrote 10/16/07

    dont tell me you've changed
    show me
    dont tell me your sorry
    show me
    dont tell me you like me
    show me
    dont tell me anything
    if you cant back it up
    your actions speak louder than your words
    now its time to prove you want me
    & you'll do anything to fix us




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