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Author: justkillme08
ASL Info:    18/F/MA
Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97 /170 /124
Words: 58
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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wrote 10/16/07

dont tell me you've changed
show me
dont tell me your sorry
show me
dont tell me you like me
show me
dont tell me anything
if you cant back it up
your actions speak louder than your words
now its time to prove you want me
& you'll do anything to fix us

Submitted on 2007-10-21 10:28:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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