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    dots Submission Name: "Pervert..."dots
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    Author: Drifting Star
    ASL Info:    19/F/Somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 22/101/73
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 842
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 941



    Description:
        **WARNING**: There's nothing pornographic here, only ...it's featuring a shotacon theme! For those who don't know, shotacon is a romantic relationship (not necessarily sexual) between two males, vastly separated by age, usually young and teen.

    This is written for the Shotacon challenge on WICKYPOP and it's based loosely on a published graphic novel.

    This is installment four of five.

    Far From Elite

    -Sennie.


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    dots"Pervert..."dots
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    He is cautious for a reason,
    though he doesn't hide his fascination overly much;
    his room-mate can see it in him--on him--
    that smile he gets when he sees his love.

    "You're such a pervert!" His friend says, cringing
    but he's not really listening; not right now...
    he's staring down at the butterfly on his cellphone
    and willing the little light to flash red.

    The light does not flash and he smiles to himself,
    gently setting the phone down beside him;
    his little lover was still so hesitant to call--
    to reach out and admit that he truly cared.

    He can't blame the boy for an honest reaction;
    it is weird--and strangely satisfying--for them both.
    So he faces his room-mate with an arranged smirk
    and politely tells him that he doesn't know the half of it.

    **




    Submitted on 2007-10-21 13:12:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don’t like the title; this may only be a personal opinion, too straight to the point.

    “though he doesn't hide his fascination overly much” its like he wants him to know he is fascinated, and the room-mate know this, he can see it, and physically as well.

    “"You're such a pervert!" His friend says, cringing” shows how shy he is, maybe even ashamed (“hesitant to call-- to reach out and admit that he truly cared.”)

    “He can't blame the boy for an honest reaction;
    it is weird--and strangely satisfying--for them both.” This came as a shock, especially if they are ashamed and shy

    I think this was very well written, :)

    | Posted on 2007-10-24 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, it's different.

    Not a subject I care all that much about, but it's very well written, and I commend you on the choice of a topic that many would shy away from.
    | Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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