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    dots Submission Name: Reflection of youdots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 492/502/133
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsReflection of youdots
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    He would laugh,
    cheerfully like a happy summer day,
    He would look in my eyes,
    on wine-kissed night -
    just like you did,

    And sometimes when I am sad,
    tearful,
    he would hug me, hold my hand,
    whisper - beautiful things of life,

    When evening sun turns to sombre moon -
    he would kiss -
    and await my smile,

    I ran away-
    you breaking my heart, breaking me
    again and again-
    when enough was too much,
    I fell in love-
    terribly in love-
    with
    reflection of you.





    Submitted on 2007-10-21 17:35:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hey hi long time no see nothing new this was good the words were very discriptive with a true meaning behind them

    great write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2007-10-23 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful and so sad. Its easy to fall in love with it and i have.

    Well done,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2007-10-22 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful, Vedanta!
    | Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      awww..sad. And so poignant.

    I really like it.

    I ran away-
    you breaking my heart, breaking me
    again and again-
    when enough was too much,
    I fell in love-
    terribly in love-
    with
    reflection of you.

    Beautiful!
    | Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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