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    dots Submission Name: An Old Fashioned Love Poemdots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 60/129/99
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 544



    Description:
       Just some thoughts about a certain someone


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    dotsAn Old Fashioned Love Poemdots
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    All this because I cannot express how I feel.
    All this because I fear the fabric of commitment.
    All this because I feel the system of life is crushing me.
    All of this for Pride?

    Where am I? I do not know.
    Where is Cupid? The god of relations.
    Where are you? In all of this.
    Where are your feelings and dreams?

    In the end it may all work out.
    In the end it could all work out.
    In the end it should all work out.
    In the end: I hope it works out.




    Submitted on 2007-10-22 18:41:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I must say, nice and better all at the same time
    Life is just a race without any winner. Well done
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a pretty interesting poem. Very repetitive, I like...
    comment me! =]
    | Posted on 2007-10-23 00:00:00 | by asian blonde | [ Reply to This ]



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