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    dots Submission Name: The 666 Ways Of Heartache (Improved version)dots
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    Author: Shadow24968
    ASL Info:    16 Male
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 69/72/34
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Dark
    Total Views: 585
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1177



    Description:
       Come this christmas I get some recording equipment, this is going to be my first acoustic song.


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    dotsThe 666 Ways Of Heartache (Improved version)dots
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    Misery that strengthens me
    Deep inside your heart
    Fighting that one demon,
    Thats tearing your life apart
    But we're gonna make it tonight
    Theres one thing you should know
    Wherever your heart will travel
    My shadows will soon follow

    Chorus
    The feeling of pain
    The feeling of agony,
    The feeling that you can't let go
    There's 666 ways of heartache
    And they're all waiting for you.
    The feeling of joy
    The feeling of sorrow
    The feelings that you swore to let go
    Theres 666 ways of heartache
    And they're all waiting for you.

    Looking at sorrows inside you,
    Tears have drown your eyes
    Should I come to be closer
    Your heart will turn to ice.
    But we're gonna make it tonight
    There's one thing you should know
    Whenever you happy and joyful
    I'm gonna fill you up with sorrow.

    Chorus

    Vocal rest (middle 8)

    Chorus

    We're gonna make it tonight
    We're gonna tear your heart apart.




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    ||| Comments |||
      well done old sport, I guess it must be 666 diffrent ways to get a hollow bliss. This song makes me think about a ghostly romantic.
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]
      very well written.
    i like it.
    i think i would like to hear it as a song. i love music but i think it is very hard for some one to put a really good poem to music because the music has to live up to the poem. for a poem that is this good. it will be hard for you to do.
    i thik i really like it as NOT a song. i dont know. the flow is really good, but broken in some (only 1 or 2) places.
    i like it. but its kinda short expecially if you are going to put it to music. i dont know
    some of the best songs are relly short. look at the song Feelin' Groovy.



    annie!
    | Posted on 2007-10-24 00:00:00 | by annie smith | [ Reply to This ]


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