Gone but not forgotten

Author: theman ASL Info:    21/m/mn Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496 /478 /149 Words: 77

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Gone but not forgotten

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To all the People that have lost someone I dedicate this to you. I know it hard Keep your head up, Have hope there dreams are not gone they only be living on right on with you, with every heartbeat you push a little bit of the perished though your vains, keeping that bond stronger then ever that no one not even god himself could tear you apart forever. Once again you will meet up again...

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heartfelt baby. :)

| Posted on 2007-10-24 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]

in the last line, you really shouldn't say again twice...it kinda detracts from the poem, which is really good and has an excellent message. who says this life is all there is? we'll all meet up again later. nice insights. i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.

| Posted on 2007-10-23 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]

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