Description: I wrote the bottom one a long time ago and ppl like it but i don't so i reviesed it a lil...so yeah
How do you kill yourself -------------------------------------------
What do you do when you want to commit suicide?
Grab the knife
Don't cry; your life has fallen in to a black bliss.
Slit your wrist; show no remorse
Clinch your fist; force yourself for a quicker happiness.
Relax in the bath tub; listen to your funeral music.
Make sure you have no regrets,
Because, tomorrow you’re not waking up
This is what you do when you want to commit suicide.
What do you do when you want to die?
You grab the knife
you don't cry
you clinch your fist and let your blood run down to your wrist.
You slit your wrist very deep multiple times.
You hide in the bath tub and let the blood run down your wrist and then the blood goes down the drain.
Make sure you have no regrets
because tomorrow you might not wake up.
This is what you do when you want to die.
It was an interesting topic but i think the writing fell a little flat. i mean, it just didnt really captivate me. Suicide is a monumental thing to the person doing it because it the END. So i just think itd be a little more impressive than "blahh....suicide...its all the same...."