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    dots Submission Name: You Touched Medots
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    Author: Emerging Soul
    ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240/1114/244
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYou Touched Medots
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    I never knew
    That anything meant anything
    Until my little world touched yours
    (you touched me, you touched me)
    and your little world touched mine
    (I touched myself)
    And you reached inside
    And I found me
    (you found me)
    I found that I meant
    Something
    To you
    To me
    To the world

    I never knew
    There was a wide world out there
    For mine had become so small
    (you touched me, you touched me)
    I looked into your eyes
    And saw outside myself
    For the first time
    You found me
    And I found myself
    And I reached inside
    (I touched myself)
    And became
    Not whole,
    But real

    Something tangible
    Just beyond my reach, perhaps
    But there




    Submitted on 2007-10-24 00:16:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh...just lovely.

    I never knew
    That anything meant anything
    Until my little world touched yours

    I love this...it's so pretty...

    A perfect testament to how life can be so meaningless until we encounter the one person that makes it real.

    I think it's amazing. You did an awesome job with this!
    | Posted on 2007-10-24 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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