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    dots Submission Name: Angstdots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 60/129/99
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 92
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 361



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    dotsAngstdots
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    Cannot think.
    Cannot write.
    Cannot feel.
    Not without you!

    Cannot shake.
    Cannot play.
    Cannot escape.
    Not without you!

    Cannot breathe.
    Cannot eat.
    Cannot sleep.
    Not without you!

    Cannot talk.
    Cannot drink.
    Cannot live.
    Not without you.




    Submitted on 2007-10-24 19:57:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow. can you say desperate? its like the guy is just sitting there, staring into space, and just refusing to do anything. its kinda sad, and you feel bad for him, but you also kinda want to say, "enough is enough, get over it. get up, let's go, move your arse." and why bother with someone who doesn't want you? they're not worth it.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]



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