Well done! i can hear this as a song when i read it...this is unusual for me...most of the time when people post lyrics i cant put a tune to it...this one reads like a song..i hope that makes sense....IMO you have done a great job...stormy
I love this Kriss, it is well writtin and a good one to come back with! I love the way it ends with the line
"in the end"
as well, it really adds something to the climax. I would love to hear this to music! Great piece Kriss, keep writing.