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Leave Me Lonely


Author: juss_kriss
ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 404 /445 /126
Words: 209
Class/Type: Lyrics /
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Description:


Just in case you don't know..
Intro = introduction
Ch. = chorus
V. = verse
B. = bridge
C. = coda

These lyrics are about loving someone you never thought would leave you, and not being able to let go.


Leave Me Lonely



intro.
who ever thought that
you would be the one
to wipe away all the pain
only to leave me lonely
in the end

ch.
how could life be so cruel
to give me everything i
could ever have asked for
and then rip it all away
i could have died then
but life chose to kill me today
only to leave me lonely
all over again

v1.
don't tell me to let go
don't tell me to be strong
'cause i left all my strength
back in his arms, in his lips
he stole it all with that sweet kiss
i never thought i'd get again

ch.

v2.
his kiss leaves me lonely
leaves me weak in the knees
how did all this happen
went from not bad to much worse
don't tell me any different
you're the only one i have had

b.
how could you be the one
to wipe away all the pain
only to leave me lonely in the end

ch.

c.
how could life be so cruel
to give me love then rip it away
how could you leave me lonely
how could you leave me lonely
in the end




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  Well done! i can hear this as a song when i read it...this is unusual for me...most of the time when people post lyrics i cant put a tune to it...this one reads like a song..i hope that makes sense....IMO you have done a great job...stormy
| Posted on 2007-10-26 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
  i feel ur pain
| Posted on 2007-10-26 00:00:00 | by asian blonde | [ Reply to This ]
  I love this Kriss, it is well writtin and a good one to come back with! I love the way it ends with the line
"in the end"
as well, it really adds something to the climax. I would love to hear this to music! Great piece Kriss, keep writing.

Sarah
| Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]
  Awww...I know exactly how you feel.

I had never loved anyone in my life...then my ex came along...I loved him more than I could have ever imagined I would...and he left...

don't tell me to let go
don't tell me to be strong
'cause i left all my strength
back in his arms, in his lips
he stole it all with that sweet kiss
i never thought i'd get again

And I felt exactly like that...

amazing job...thanks for sharing!
| Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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