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    dots Submission Name: Bostitch® Finger Nailsdots
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    Author: Secrets Unheard
    ASL Info:    18/m/nj
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 84/101/48
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 111
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    digging into my fore arms, or hammered deeper and deeper into my wrists.


    The blood flow is catastrophic.

    a pause...

    like a grown man standing before a tsunami as it is about to crash down on insignificance...


    a little girl curved over a pink frosting, vanilla sponge birthday cake with four ever burning candles, just before she blows them out.

    the pianist's white gloved finger rubbing faintly against the ivory keys of the grand piano, the opening song of opening night.



    an eruption...the fire hydrant off my body, expulsing the blood from my body...


    and it will runneth all over this oak wood...this bed made for one,

    this table set for twelve.




    Submitted on 2007-10-25 10:09:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lovely, I really liked it. I specially liked these two.
    "a little girl curved over a pink frosting, vanilla sponge birthday cake with four ever burning candles, just before she blows them out.

    the pianist's white gloved finger rubbing faintly against the ivory keys of the grand piano, the opening song of opening night."

    It was nice. And... I don't know what else to say, I'm not good with critiques at all.
    So yeah, nice job

    with insanity,
    Sofie
    | Posted on 2007-10-26 00:00:00 | by Broken-lands | [ Reply to This ]
      This does make me laugh; however, my laughter is out of a degree of disturbance. It goes without saying that this is a rather dark piece. I did enjoy it. It was unique in its content as well as delivery. Although, it does present the painful situation of 'throwing in the towel.' It makes me sad. -but sad like empathy. I'm not sad enough to do anything about it persay, but it does impact me enough so that I will always remember this piece.
    When I first began reading it, I wasn't sure that it would be that great of a piece.. then as I read on, saw and felt what the piece had to present, I became aware.
    I don't know what the inspiration was for this piece. It is a good work though. Bravo.

    Crystal
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by purely_complex | [ Reply to This ]
      candle
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by Dimension_X | [ Reply to This ]



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