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    dots Submission Name: Simplydots
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    Author: Fryingpan
    ASL Info:    15/M/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 11/17/12
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 63
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    dotsSimplydots
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    Men are dying quite simply,
    While we just sit here and watch.
    What strikes me is the wrongness
    An inability to stop.

    Although it may have seemed right,
    at the time most things do,
    but throwing away young life
    is a curse unto you.

    For you mister President,
    King, Comrade, whatever
    have the power to end it all
    banish killing to the nether....




    Submitted on 2007-10-25 16:54:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you hit the nail right on the head, the minds of society and citizens are [censored]ed up these days. everybody needs to step back and look at they're doing, or, really, what they're not.

    written wonderfully by the way, much respect.
    | Posted on 2007-10-26 00:00:00 | by stasisindarknes | [ Reply to This ]
      this made me think of the war, and how so many people are dying for something so useless, i dont no if this is what you meant but its just what i thought. goodwrite
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah...

    Damn the man...lol

    Good job with this...

    Although it may have seemed right,
    at the time most things do,
    but throwing away young life
    is a curse unto you.

    I agree.
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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