This was a very good piece, everything fitted in perfectly. The only thing that I didn't like about it was how you had D: first stanza N: second stanza and then A: third stanza ... if you catch my drift. It just sort of took out the bit of mystery I thought this piece contained. Other than that, great work!
Very Origanel and I must say exceptionally well written
I too have experimented with continuous Haiku poems and I know they are not easy to write but once they come together they are really art
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
I really like this..its original...and a very lovely way to describe DNA...i had never thought of it in this context before but you are absolutely right ...i know nothing of haiku so cannot comment on its form...but i really liked it it has a very nice feel to it...stormy