so sick that im high
ignoring the inevitable
i can feel you lying in the pits of my stomach
screaming in rage
but i cant ease you anymore
i cant ease me anymore
twelve hours of sleep has never been enough
I guess it reads depression too me, I liked it.
I don't know, I feel like there is more to this story that is not being told, you maybe could have gone further with it.
But that being said I still really liked it.
short and simple....maybe too simple.....not enough...i will have to read the ong version....but not that bad....so its good that you wrote a longer version already.
Its short, but I do feel that its powerful. Rage isn't an elaborate thing, its just THERE, you know?
Its so much harder when you're hurting, and you know somebody else whos hurting, and you just can't help them. I really get this, I love it.
"so sick that im high
ignoring the inevitable"
I know that feeling so well, you're so angry and hurt that you just have to do something to make it all go away, even if just for a few minutes. Because when its gone, you don't have to deal with it, and you can pretend that you don't ever have to.
"but i cant ease you anymore
i cant ease me anymore"
I know this too. When they ask you to just help them, and you know you can't, because you don't even know how to help yourself. You want to so bad, but you can't, because you know it would hurt even worse when it doesn't work.
"i can feel you lying in the pits of my stomach
screaming in rage"
Once, a few months ago, I got into a depressed rage. It was like everything boiled over and spilled everywhere. I literally threw up I was so mad.
"twelve hours of sleep has never been enough"
Sometimes even sleep doesn't let us escape pain, though it does make us so much more distant. Thats something I've always loved.
This is a write from someone I believe who has been through a mini hell recently and feels like their is no need to move forward
To me it seems like this person is just about ready to give up
I urge you to find the Positive to the Negatives that are weighing you down
Once you find those positives let them carry you to happiness
I would also like to be one of the first to WELCOME you to Elite Skills
I hope this site brings you all the Happiness it has brought to me
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
Submission Name: rage(original)
