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    dots Submission Name: Her Twilight Dancedots
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    Author: gallagherc314
    ASL Info:    29, Female, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    1.56 - 1/3/5
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 86
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    Bytes: 1019



    Description:
       Not Autobiographical. Poem about female freedom.


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    dotsHer Twilight Dancedots
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    In twilight I saw my mother dance -
    the bare round of her belly gleaming, giving birth to the
    beginning of free will, caught like a sturgeon
          struggling with the current which
    was once her lover.
    The gentleness of his embrace turned cold,
          calling for obedience, till she shed his
    word like clothes, refusing his protection.

    And so she clothes herself in shadows;
    the light from streetlamps, and
          occasional cars becoming like the
    word of dawn calling for the extravagance of color. She
    was dancing out prayers like her mother’s ancestors,
    with faith in her feet to move
    God to open heaven
    and see the rain wash away
    the dust of dry earth thirsting for one kind
    word, one hint of remorse, or appreciation.
    Was she foolish to dance so fiercely?
    God thought not.




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 15:40:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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