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    dots Submission Name: unsaiddots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsunsaiddots
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    all the scars on her toung
    all the words left unspoken
    Every thought left in her mind
    never to be heard
    you say she's the bigger woman
    for leaving so much unsaid
    never telling him how she realy feels
    everything he does and says
    she keeps inside
    every time he hurts her
    she just puts a smile on
    and pretends everythings okay
    every fear kept hidden
    locked away never to be known
    she bites her toung even
    as the blood poors from her mouth
    still chooseing to leave everything unsaid




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 20:20:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      leaving unsaid things as such can leave old wounds open or leave them to be tampered with. miss you and still here for you.

    love always
    | Posted on 2009-01-12 00:00:00 | by Staggs | [ Reply to This ]
      This was written very well. It flowed well, but there the emotion was very strong. I can relate to by second person. My dad was like this the whole time he was with my mom. This was a really good write. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

    »MIss MIsery«
    | Posted on 2007-10-27 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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