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    dots Submission Name: Aberrantdots
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    Author: feildeagle
    ASL Info:    18/M/AL
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/10
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 999



    Description:
       Story of a man that is so self-absorbed that he forgets where he stands in life.


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    dotsAberrantdots
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    Wish I never had to endure
    Those old raspy entrepreneurs
    They tell you lies to ensure
    It gets you when you mature
    Obscurities are only the butt-end
    Prematurities tell the story now

    You can't pretend to comprehend
    The things you attend to defend
    Your best friend rots in the trench
    The stench, high and omitted
    A committed man never falls
    Calls to him an invitation
    Optations fill his feeble mind

    The man you look at
    Stands up to combat
    Does that give you some prayers?
    The layers of a gain smited by God
    Your facade goes to show me nothing
    No sure thing was very clear at all
    To enthral me was the cogency

    Everyone soon became aberrant
    Current gripped hold of society
    Anxiety provided ailments
    Derailments seen for their lost uses
    Bruises raised by the soul's vision
    Indecision to even wish




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 22:09:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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