Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Relishdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: feildeagle
    ASL Info:    18/M/AL
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/10
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 73
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 948



    Description:
       Written to my girlfriend as my realization of our love.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsRelishdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Of all the things that
    Could have happened
    I knew deep inside it was bound to be
    I always forsaw it
    I do not deserve this life
    My shell deepened with decay
    Of my former self
    I knew only of me
    No one else was allowed into the crevices
    Where they were sure to be cut off
    No one else saw what a monster was inside

    When I came to my senses
    I finally saw through my feebleness
    And recollected myself
    Only to have my incision torn apart
    My eyes bled black with something that was not there
    The empty crypt was replaced with knowledge
    As the flesh pained itself into my nails
    I slowly knew of this thing inside

    Again that day you were pissed
    Again that day we were closer to what we were
    Again that day we became further from what we knew
    Again that day we were livid with anemic souls




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 22:13:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.