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    dots Submission Name: Tale of Two Knights (Dear Friend)dots
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    Author: feildeagle
    ASL Info:    18/M/AL
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/10
    Words: 266
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 92
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1745



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       A vent for my anger for the loss of one of my really good friends by his own words.


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    dotsTale of Two Knights (Dear Friend)dots
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    My brother where are you?
    Everything we shared - broken down
    Forgotten in an instant
    Flameberges placed in my spine

    We had it all beside us
    We shared these things
    But I guess it wasn't enough for you
    I guess you wanted more

    If you even think I'm sad
    If you even say I'm mad
    You've got another thing commin'!
    You got another thing commin'!

    I am not afraid of you!
    Step up, step back
    Take a look at yourself
    Take a hard look now

    I forgave you seven-hundred times
    But I guess it wasn't good enough for you
    Holding your nose high in air
    I am like a stranger here

    If you even think I'm sad
    If you even say I'm mad
    You've got another thing commin'!
    You got another thing commin'!

    Where were you when I was down?
    You let me lie there, drowned in my blood
    You kept me hidden there, face down in the pool
    If you never cared then why did you bother?

    Kill me now and let me fly
    The clouds won't hold me back
    Sun-crest visions give me strength
    No one will throw me down anymore

    You made friends with me, and now,
    We charge each other at the battle of the fates
    My brother died, long time ago
    Replaced by false knowledge

    Decisions made due to trust
    Flung you down the murder-hole
    You're a crooked stiletto, unrefined
    The strings cannot be cut, woven by the gods

    If you even think I'm sad
    If you even say I'm mad




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 22:16:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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