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    dots Submission Name: Sands of Timedots
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    Author: feildeagle
    ASL Info:    18/M/AL
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/10
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 65
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1356



    Description:
       Someone trying to excape their problems by going back/forward in time and getting burned in the end by Satan or other hellish demon ruler.


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    dotsSands of Timedots
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    Lost and thrown into the sand
    I come back with ten thousand fists
    Punch the man - watch him writhe
    Let him die - see him fall

    You suffer for feelings
    This tank can't hold him
    We gotchya' on the run
    We gotchya' cornered good

    These lost stars run from you
    Be true to yourself - freedom forever
    Feelings condemn - re-live the run
    Control me - shine through the glass

    Time stems throughout your face
    You feel me slipping away from this
    Frames shutter past me slowly
    You look at me with eyes widely closed

    Hearts skip beats - birds sing no more
    I feel my skin growing cold and dark
    I want to feel your warmth next to me
    Reaper - sweats me through his pores

    I crashed all the potrals to which
    I gave this sickness an outlet
    Will you save my eyes? Charred.
    I can't run away anymore

    With this in my mind I stumble
    This is terror - can't get back
    I want to see this through
    I feel the conscious on my fingertips

    Chasing me through space and time,
    The reaper will never catch my soul
    I will hide until he has past me o'er
    Until upon this heap I will - be cast out




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 22:21:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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