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    dots Submission Name: Pawzedots
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    Author: feildeagle
    ASL Info:    18/M/AL
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/10
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 949



    Description:
       Written directly in-your-face-like to my grandfather who wasted his life with cigarettes and alcohol and now has lung and liver cancer.


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    dotsPawzedots
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    In a delusional rage we sing
    About things we lose
    Viruses spread like dye
    Trying to justify its thread
    Treads of a corroded tank
    Going over the bank of the road
    The pleasures of the physical life
    So critical, slightly misinterpreted
    Don't do this, don't do that
    Flat as a door mat it was figured out
    Ways were changed, thoughts we hindered
    I figured you would change - I figured wrong
    Everything - you do - leads to
    Abhor - everything - you did
    Leads to - nothing
    No more - can't take - anymore
    Leave me - strain me - something more
    lights on - no one's home - no one cares
    Put your life on pawze
    And let the laws take the strife
    Put your life on pawze
    And let the draw pull you in
    Put your life on pawze
    And let the straw lick your spite
    Put your life on pawze




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 22:23:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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