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    Author: stasisindarknes
    ASL Info:    15/f/vt
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 23/28/27
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 80
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 705



    Description:
       a total freewrite. the meaning of parts is still unclear to me.
    do i even consider this a poem? maybe its just a strand of words.
    haha. you tell me.


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    dotsuntitleddots
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    feelings of rage
    age
    unbelievable
    i can't

    you
    own everything
    i bite my anger in the back
    back room light swinging
    side to side

    misspellings, mispronunciations
    to appear
    what?
    unreal
    unrealistic

    expectations
    of hope
    relentlessness
    i love
    the way you killed
    yourself to
    save me
    sacrificial

    how i trust
    trusted
    the way you presented
    my doubt
    you were sure
    my doubt
    your doubt rises
    and it was i
    who killed
    what i loved the most




    Submitted on 2007-10-26 22:39:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is interesting....in the sense that a seeming random collection of words and strands of phrases can in the end have some kind of meaning emerge from the chaos. I especially like the last paragraph.
    | Posted on 2007-12-08 00:00:00 | by marigold | [ Reply to This ]



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