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    dots Submission Name: Everyday I'm Thankfuldots
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    Author: trynfinity
    ASL Info:    32/f/California
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 86/94/59
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 65
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1007



    Description:
       Some days I know you question
    your effect upon my life.
    Trust in all I'm saying
    it's been nothing but good and bright.


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    dotsEveryday I'm Thankfuldots
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    Everyday I'm thankful
    you came into my life.
    The good days and the bad
    the darkest and the bright.

    No matter what has happened
    it's been better because you're there.
    For your love and understanding
    no words can compare.

    The gifts that you have given me
    I never dreamed that I'd receive.
    The strength I've always found in you
    gave me hope when I couldn't believe.

    Some days I know you question
    your effect upon my life.
    Trust in all I'm saying
    it's been nothing but good and bright.

    All my dreams and longings
    came true because of you.
    Without which I'd be lost
    unsure of what to do.

    So every day I'm thankful
    for the love and hope you give.
    You've given me the reason
    to dream, to love, to live.




    October 25,2007




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    ||| Comments |||
      Me Likey very much. it's simple and clean. the quick lines that mean so much are great. it's not really about the words themselves. the are just the medium. Your word choice, though is fabulous. this is my type of writing. Try not to stray in the world of cliché though, I hate clichés , I prefer stuff put differently. Very Good.
    Peace!

    AeThe Lost Poet
    | Posted on 2007-10-27 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]



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