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    dots Submission Name: K's Lullabydots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 329/334/138
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1402



    Description:
       My love and I had some trouble sleeping one night, so I wrote her, and sang to her with my incredibly off key voice, this lullaby. Neither of us actually fell asleep, but I thought it was a good write.


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    dotsK's Lullabydots
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    if you sleep today.
    get you your rest now,
    tomorrow we'll play.

    I'll give you the sunset,
    if you give me your smile.
    promise me one thing,
    that you'll stay awhile.

    This is a Lullaby
    sleep well my dear,
    40 winks, 30 breaths,
    and I'm still here.

    I'll give you my midnight,
    if you give me your touch.
    I'll tell you forever,
    I love you that much.

    I'll give you my morning,
    if you give me a word,
    just one sound from you
    is the best thing I've heard

    I'll give you my afternoon,
    if you give me your night.
    Love you forever,
    I say I just might.

    This is a Lullaby,
    sleep well my love,
    40 winks, 30 breaths.
    stars up above.

    I'll give you anything,
    if you promise to tell
    what I can do for you,
    I'll listen well.

    I'll give you my everything,
    no matter what.
    you're welcome inside me,
    my doors never shut.

    This is a lullaby,
    sleep well my love.
    40 winks, 30 breaths,
    stars up above

    This is a lullaby
    sleep well my dear,
    40 winks, 30 breaths.
    and I'm still here.




    Submitted on 2007-10-27 09:05:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, very sweet. I'm speechless actually so this probably won't be the best comment. In a way it made me kind of sad..good sad? Very well written though I like every choice of word you used. Even though you say you sung this in an off key voice I'm sure it was ah, still very beautiful. :P First thing I've read from you since I've been back, and I'm glad I did!
    -inkpen
    | Posted on 2008-04-02 00:00:00 | by inkpen | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good write. Very touching...
    | Posted on 2007-10-29 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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