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    dots Submission Name: Hybrid Thinkingdots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 981
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 458



    Description:
       Just some thoughts on what we should do as a human race to better ourselves and the Earth.

    Edit: Recycling thing just added thanks to EEKS


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHybrid Thinkingdots
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    The t.v is on.
    Turn it off.
    Walk to work.
    Instead of drive.
    Organize something.
    Instead of whine in writing.
    Protest for what is human.
    Instead of ignore it.
    Recycle something
    Instead of wasting resources
    Destroy the clock.
    Instead of live by it.
    Cook for yourself.
    Instead of letting the corporations do it for you.
    Kill nothing.
    Instead of everything.




    Submitted on 2007-10-27 12:58:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      chill poem. i like the part about destroying the clock and not living be it. and the part about not killing everything.(=


    peace
    Grim Aylin
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      dude i really like this and i cant imagine why noone else commented on it. it is simple but very effective.

    recycle something
    instead of wasting resources
    | Posted on 2007-10-29 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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