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    dots Submission Name: I have no titledots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
    Total Views: 145
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1168



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       hey when you guys read this.....help me think of title plz!!!=P


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    dotsI have no titledots
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    I want it to stop. But th yelling continues without end. He staggers towad me.... Begining my unending doom. I can smell the stench seeping through his lips. As he balls his fists I wait for him to strike-there's no use in an escape.
    His fist lands onto my jaw. I'm thown to the near by wall like a little doll. "Come on, get up you piece of shit!" I hear the slur in his hateful words."That's all you are, a worthless slut!" His words hurt the most. They scar the soul rather than the flesh.
    I fall to the ground after a few more hits. Then he finds the enjoyment of kicking my sides-I think he likes to watch my body jerk as he kicks. Now he stops. He's about to passout. "It will all be over soon," I say to myself. He stumbles to his hair...it's all over.
    The following morning-simillar to the other mornings after-I'm woken up by soft male whispers. " Hey sweetheart, it's time to wake up honey." He is sober. I like this man better. He is charming an his eyes are warm. I gaze into the stranger's face as he smiles back. I hope he stays this time....




    Submitted on 2007-10-27 13:54:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      even though it's just a small passage but it really spoke a lot about the situation. i could sense the emotions of the woman in the story quite a bit. keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2007-11-03 00:00:00 | by asian blonde | [ Reply to This ]
      Ummmm I don't know I'm not very good at titles. But your writing has reached me . It's good aside from a few grammatical errors. I, in sense, know it's like to be with some like that. Good write all the same.
    | Posted on 2007-10-29 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]



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