Description: Basically about being in an "unofficial" relationship with someone. You have claims on them, everything physical and emotional is still involved, but since you're not really together, all you have is the right to bitch if you mess around or end up dating someone else.
When You Love Someone Else -------------------------------------------
v1.
all those lies you told me
are but bullshit well told
'cause she knows their meaning too
for me those words have grown cold
every feeling that's never left
now grows strong in her heart
and i can't help but die
whenever we end up apart
Ch.
my love, our love
was never enough
though it's twisted now
i knew not what it was
to be thrown away so easily
just to keep a tight grip
of everything that used to be
my heart can't take it
when you love someone else
v2.
every kiss that i savored
was a kiss well wasted
for as your lips touched her own
she knew just how it tasted
every touch that i remember
is a touch she now knows
and i can't help but cry
for this is how it always goes
b.
she has found what i have lost
but for her it comes
at no second cost
what was so unconditional and free
belongs to her and no longer me
she's scared to lose you
and at first i was too
but i've lost you so many times
that it's really nothing new
c.
my love, our love
was never enough
but yet you still kiss me
when you love someone else
This is soooooo good Kriss I love it. The lines:
"every kiss that i savored
was a kiss well wasted
for as your lips touched her own
she knew just how it tasted"
pure geniouse in words! As always with most of your work I love it. And wish I could hear it put to music, I swear you will be famouse one day if you go for it. THis is so full of raw emotion and writtin very eliquently. Great piece, keep writing.
Submission Name: When You Love Someone Else
