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    dots Submission Name: Sounds on my tonguedots
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    Author: albery rinash
    ASL Info:    18/M/USA
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 86/40/22
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
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    dotsSounds on my tonguedots
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    My tongue is the playground of words.

    At my tongue, a zoo of words apparates. This menagerie, this saccharine totem-pole, now and then, tarries outcarven on my tongue blade.

    But chiefly, the meanings of the words debouch to my mind, while like nascent famuluses, the attendant sounds are shipwrecked on my tongue.

    There, on the lamina, this sonic plurality undergoes mitosis, dissolving into my blood stream, subitaneous metastasis. The neurotoxins in this beck of words, like a nepenthe or Styx, obliviates me spatio-temporally. I become a glossal gourmet, a lexical aesthete.

    A frisson courses through me, as I ponder over the plenary monarchy these words exert succulently over me. Is this my Fugu, is this my Mochi...?


    Even now, my mind retains the echoes of these words. Not veridical facsimiles, but a miscegenation of sounds , a pastiche of compressions and rarefactions , a foliage of leafed tintinnabulation.




    Submitted on 2007-10-28 04:14:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      holy smokes!
    are you for serious?
    just how many huge words can you fit into such a small thought [and how many do you expect me to remember from my highschool days?! ]

    interesting though...
    i have a friend who once wrote something about words and letters on his tongue and some of your ideas strike me as very similar...

    but yes... this seems like a dangerous kind of playground
    | Posted on 2007-10-28 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I felt as if I was reading a science text book with some bits of obsession for the human anatomy, especially the organs, to be general.

    Or, you used a very good thesaurus.

    Either way, it was easy to follow, even if you used terminology every third word.
    | Posted on 2007-10-28 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]


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