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    dots Submission Name: absolute ridedots
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    Author: to-wit
    Elite Ratio:    0.59 - 27/148/488
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsabsolute ridedots
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    the sick city dweller
    well,here fella's take a break
    lest we run late for the rape
    cantankerous me
    absolutely joking
    must be what im smoking
    toking away
    ahoy,the other day
    dismay religion
    must i keep on bitchin?
    carry us away
    during these thoughts this man stood aside his work and tightened the lid on his water bottle.




    Submitted on 2007-10-29 09:52:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I thought it was pretty good. I thought it flowed quite nicely. I like your use of language. It's not predictable which I found refresshing.
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by IEggman7 | [ Reply to This ]



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