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    dots Submission Name: Unsaiddots
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    Author: Ola
    ASL Info:    18/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 221/187/42
    Words: 334
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2043



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    I had loved you
    Eternities ago
    And it didn’t matter
    How far you were or how close

    But from a distance
    I watched you not see
    And till this day
    I regret what could have been

    If only I had said
    What I felt and how much I cared
    Back then I wish I knew
    The courage to tell you the truth

    I care for you, long to see you
    Every minute of every day
    Cant you see how, I’m never down
    When our eyes connect that way
    But its too late, curse this cruel fate
    If only I hadn’t left things unsaid…

    As time passed
    My heart healed
    But like a fool
    I would not act but I’d feel.

    I would walk by
    Without a glance
    Though all my emotions
    Would like to leap at the chance

    If only I had said
    What I felt and how much I cared
    You’d think I would have learned
    That you’re worse off keeping love to yourself

    (I wish I could tell you)
    I care for you, long to see you
    Every minute of every hour
    I think of you, always feel you
    When you are near me or around
    But its too late, curse this cruel fate
    If only I wont leave things unsaid…

    There’s something different
    ‘bout what I feel for you
    It’s not an option
    To let you slip through

    For all others
    I felt it was alright
    To let them go,
    To live our separate lives

    I don’t know what to say
    It’s not as easy to look away
    And I cant just walk by
    ‘cause I find that I stop dead, each time I try.

    I care for you, long to see you
    Every second as it goes by
    You’re in my head, deep in my heart
    I see you and I fly…
    For the first time, before it’s too late,
    I won’t leave things left unsaid.




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    ||| Comments |||
      "Though all my emotions
    Would like to leap at the chance" It would flow better if it was "Though all my emotions
    Would leap at the chance." And "That you're worse off keeping love to yourself." I like that line very good, but it could be better. "You're worse off keeping the love." It'd just help the flow. other than that it was great. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

    »MIss MIsery«
    | Posted on 2007-10-30 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]



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