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    dots Submission Name: The last breathdots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 492/502/133
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsThe last breathdots
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    Afloat on the highest, farthest mountains,
    She would soon leave - unaware;

    Where life could be rosier, fragrant -
    death more welcome,
    Can you stay?
    Her mind has strayed -
    where life has replaced heart;

    Love has been here - briefly,
    Where angles dwell often,
    A story ended where it had begun,
    Breaking and unbreaking - this soul worthless,

    If you decide to visit - dearest one!
    She sleeps here
    She hoped - once,
    Can it live a little longer?
    This last breath.




    Submitted on 2007-10-29 14:43:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked this poem, It was very intrueging (spelling). Keep up the good write and I can't wait to read more of your poetry.
    | Posted on 2007-10-30 00:00:00 | by remedy bayden | [ Reply to This ]



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