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    dots Submission Name: Destruction (of writers block)dots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsDestruction (of writers block)dots
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    Depression sets in,
    kept from you.
    Missing the things
    you got me through.

    Never before
    this empty was I.
    Never more
    shall I want to die.

    But without you,
    I have no dream.
    Without you,
    hope doesn't gleam.

    All you are
    is what I wasn't.
    All you did
    is what I mustn't.

    Sadness sets in,
    breaking me down.
    In my pity
    I would drown.

    Yet you rise,
    as if from sleep.
    Once again your mine,
    poetry to keep.




    Submitted on 2007-10-29 17:58:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not bad at all
    I really liked the rhyme scheme used in this write
    I can feel the sadness you are speaking of in this write
    It seems to be a very strong depression but Im Positive you will start feeling better after expressing your inner most feelings in words
    Great Job!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-05 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      really great job...i know how it feels to have writers block...it's so annoying...i really like this poem...because i love to write poetry too...it's like a part of me...i crave it...i need it...it is a way for me to let out my emotions that i could not speak..but when i write them down on paper...they just flow. great job...this is going on my fav. list.
    -Amber-
    | Posted on 2007-10-30 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]


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