[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Destruction (of writers block)dots

    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 615
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 620


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDestruction (of writers block)dots

    Depression sets in,
    kept from you.
    Missing the things
    you got me through.

    Never before
    this empty was I.
    Never more
    shall I want to die.

    But without you,
    I have no dream.
    Without you,
    hope doesn't gleam.

    All you are
    is what I wasn't.
    All you did
    is what I mustn't.

    Sadness sets in,
    breaking me down.
    In my pity
    I would drown.

    Yet you rise,
    as if from sleep.
    Once again your mine,
    poetry to keep.

    Submitted on 2007-10-29 17:58:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      Not bad at all
    I really liked the rhyme scheme used in this write
    I can feel the sadness you are speaking of in this write
    It seems to be a very strong depression but Im Positive you will start feeling better after expressing your inner most feelings in words
    Great Job!!!
    God Bless
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    | Posted on 2007-11-05 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      really great job...i know how it feels to have writers block...it's so annoying...i really like this poem...because i love to write poetry too...it's like a part of me...i crave it...i need it...it is a way for me to let out my emotions that i could not speak..but when i write them down on paper...they just flow. great job...this is going on my fav. list.
    | Posted on 2007-10-30 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Linger written by saartha
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    Wavelength written by saartha
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Fasade written by jackz
    Push written by JanePlane
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Every..... written by jackz




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]