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    dots Submission Name: Contentious Liarsdots

    Author: Nashataku
    ASL Info:    25/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 374/465/70
    Words: 393
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Angry
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       Not everything should be understood and sometimes its better to get something off your chest when it is bugging you, but sometimes it better to make it misunderstood.

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    Contentious Liars

    Inside be angry
    But outside you are calm
    Not to be seen by the world of the mortals
    But only to be played with emotionless angels

    Hiding there true emotions
    Only to shine them when they desire
    The agony of the blood as they backstab you
    Originated aggravation piled into a can
    Opened without a can opener
    But instead opened with pressure
    Causing the explosion of over-tempered devils
    Eradicating the care and concern
    Once used towards a individual
    And only malice and anger remains

    Use harsh words to belittle someone
    Due to your lack of power
    Incantation angelic power
    Under compromise due to the fact of not looking
    Through a window containing a mirror on the opposite side

    Destroy self-image in the eyes of others
    Shrug your shoulders in lost concern
    Opinionate yourself as you deserve respect
    But disrespect everyone that deserve none
    As if god like powers harness the inner soul
    Of the one you call your own
    Giving you the pre-judgment of who deserves respect

    3 years you were given more to play
    But yet those three years show no accomplishment
    So beat the ones down below you for selfless
    Insecurity of your own trouble
    Signing binding contracts to get you in doors
    But yet your signature is not your own
    But instead a scapegoat since your troubles locked you down
    Bad decisions you should face the effects
    But you still lack dealing with the cause

    Never give into insight because your knowledge is all knowing
    Show only compromise by broken hearts that bleed your own blood
    Wrap your tongue around the victim cuz your words are enticing
    But never give way to the victim as they scream for help
    Suck as a leech would suck
    But yet belittle the rat beside your bed

    This place you call home this place I call trial
    This place you call comfort this place I call discomfort
    This place you call your own, this place you can't provide
    Show no mercy for your own decisions, as you drills holes
    In your protagonist's head
    Never to say thank you sincerely because you beat the dog
    Every time it realizes it's not a drone
    Control your pawn with wicked hands
    And never give the chance for freedom of the slave.



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      Sometimes, it can be hard, can't it? To feel like you yourself are the hypocritical one, the one you hate, and can't understand. The one you understand perfectly. To feel like there are two sides of you, one inside, and one that everyone sees. A persona, a faquade. Are you afriad? Lost? Confused? Or do you want someone who can understand the anger. Can tell you why you act and think like this. Anger, the killer, the modivater. Closely linked with fear; pain.

    Someone hurt you, didn't they? Worse yet, you thought they coulden't. You thought you were safe, untouchable. You found out that you aren't. You were killed. They made it hurt inside didn't they? Made you feel like you were having a heart attack. Not just once, but again and again, untill you just wanted it all to end.

    You're afraid of being hurt again, so you don't care. You don't LET yourself care. You are mad at yourself, perhaps? For having a chance to trust again, to change for the better, but you let the chance slide by. Maybe not just once, but many times, untill now. Now that chance is gone, isn't it? Or is it? It wasn't just at one point either was it? It was over a long period of time, and you don't like that you let them, am I right? This is what I see, you feel weak, you want to be strong. You want to feel, you are afraid to. You don't want to be hurt. Again.

    Well? Am I right?

    Keep it real,
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by Texan_Poet | [ Reply to This ]

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