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Faded Away

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 199
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Faded Away

let's keep this simple honey..i love u but u dont luv me
you know you're alright
dont play these games tonight
here i am stranded in the rain
& starting to wonder why i even came?
i guess it didn't matter in the end
because everyone who mattered won
my dreams are empty
so it seems, so it seems
you can't take what's left
what's left is mine
let me say what i want
your going to forget anyway
cause that's just me
i'm forgotten so easily
i know you want to go
but just stand here for a second
so i can take one last look
at the future i thought i had
so convinced, so convinced
it'll take me weeks
maybe even months to get past this
but just know right now
even if you forget in the morning
that i'll love you regardless
you were everything to me
but my everything just shattered right in front of me
but don't you worry love
tommorow the sun will rise
tomorrow ill open my eyes
and i'll remember the pain
but i'll live again
i'll remember as if it were yesterday
but in your memory, it's faded away

Submitted on 2007-10-30 06:04:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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