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Submission Name: holding on dots

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Author:	dancer06
ASL Info:	20/f
Elite Ratio:	4.74 - 232/171/43
Words:	18

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	99
Average Vote:	4.5000
Bytes:	127

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holding on dots

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I'm trying to hard
to keep you my everything

You're trying so hard
To make your nothing.

Submitted on 2007-10-30 11:44:16 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
Wow. I don't think I've seen the situation summed-up so succinctly.
It says it all, though. Been there, done that, understand it. Nicely done.
| Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by amrslamr | [ Reply to This ]

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