Well first the poem is written very well, but it doesnt sound finished the last stanza seems to be left hanging out there. but other then that its well written especailly when one thinks of the subject matter. I hope who ever your talking about, knows that even though its going to be hard to get away that if she wants to theres people that can help her. I mean no one should have to be trapped in any situation, but I guess from expirence one should always know its going to take alot of time and rushing can make matters worse. I hope things work out I really do. Good write.
like ive said before its sounds bad. in both of the pieces ive read it is from the point of you looking at another person. maybe it isnt you and it is someone you care about like a really good friend. but whoever should try to leave. it sounds bad. i know its hard to start over but moving on is better
Submission Name: Trapped
