It was darn beautiful. I liked the head on collision line, that was lovely. Overall it left me sad... But I really liked the 3rd stanza. That one made me smile. I think the poem was good. I guess the only thing I could call you on would be that the 1st stanza had 3 lines and the rest had 4 which is odd. And I liked the 1st stanze least of all because it seemes oversimplified.But to tell you the truth the amount of lines per stanza and whatnot has never mattered to me. Its just something Id point out if I was peer editing in class or something.