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    dots Submission Name: Incomplete Rebirthdots
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    Author: Suven7
    ASL Info:    18 female Fla
    Elite Ratio:    7.1 - 477/259/47
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 103
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    Bytes: 839



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       I was born, but I was not.


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    dotsIncomplete Rebirthdots
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    I’m writing again
    This time, using some other
    Poor writer’s hand.
    This hand I talk of –
    - Well, let’s not bother with that
    But the things I write of
    Are not the usual stuff.

    I can’t seem to find the
    Meaning, says Andy.

    Where’s the symbolism,
    Says Christy.

    And let’s not even get to
    Ronny, who doesn’t even exist.

    Such poor talks make for
    Poor conversations.
    The only hand that would
    Bother to write of them
    Is a lonely one.
    This hand I talk of
    Communicates through
    The dashes of my fingers,

    And edits through the films
    Of my eyes.
    But no longer is it connected
    To my body.
    And least of all, my heart.




    Submitted on 2007-10-30 19:51:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      o
    kay.

    well.

    uh..

    I have nothing to say

    literaly.
    except that your poems are getting less and less deep.
    Such as this one.
    Or maybe you're trying the new trend of everyone writing like crap.

    not that you wrote like crap.
    It's just that you always write things with deep meaning.
    I'm jst not used to it.

    oh...and putting my name on here made this poem extra better.
    That was the only thing I liked.
    NO hard feelings

    --Fearless
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by Fearless | [ Reply to This ]
      >.< WHAT?!

    "And least of all, my heart"

    I didn't mean there was NO meaning in the poem...I meant the little things thrown in here and there...maybe once or twice in a poem wouldn't have a real deep meaning. Not everything in life is deep. I like your simplistic additions.

    "Ronny" Hilarious...
    You are a great writer, it's not your hands. Your hands are mearly tools of your brain and heart. Those poems and those writings of long ago were yours then just as now...the same amazing writer.

    I love you...keep writing.
    ANdy
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Olah89 | [ Reply to This ]



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