Why is it no one can understand just why I feel so bad
Maybe its because they never lost everything they had
Its hard to try to make them see why I hate my life
I lost everything that I had even my kids and wife
Everyone just seems to think it shouldn't really matter
They just cant understand why my heart would shatter
I lost my wife and best friend of forty years or more
And just to top it off she proved she was a whore
She couldn't just leave me and go off on her own
She had to find another man just to set the tone
She made it clear that we were through never to be again
No matter how hard I tried there was no way to win
Every one tries to say just move on with your life
Sorry its not that easy when all I see is strife
I sit alone day after day nothing else to do
Everyone might just as well look and say FUCK YOU
One day soon it will all be done and I will be no more
All because my wife turned herself into a whore
Maybe then they'll understand just how bad I felt
I didn't want to play the cards that I was dealt
I'm sorry about what happened. The poem is amazing and i love the way you are able to portaril the cold feelings the world can cast on someone when they don't truely understand.
I wish you the best of luck with moving on even though it will be a hard journey.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
this is really gd but i dnt thnk u shuld have the capitals on letters like the j in just even though i know your trying to emphasise it it just doesnt look right but otherwise i think youve done a rwally good job