I think the strongest stanza in this poem is the last one. The rhyming started to become more unique and less cliché. I think most of your poem lacks showing the reader what is going on, instead you tell them for the most part. Though towards the end is where you really start to pick up. "And spill my feelings though this pen" is probably the best line in this poem. The word 'spill' make a great image of what is going on.