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    dots Submission Name: Desolatedots
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    Author: Drowning Daisy
    ASL Info:    25/Lady/England
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 6/9/6
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 118
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1601



    Description:
       This reflects my views on events portrayed on the 'news'. Lies. The TV lies.


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    dotsDesolatedots
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    Spoken words rest stagnant in rigid mouths
    Burnt flesh flakes softly from barely-grown bones
    Fields of lovers scatter landscapes,
    Pure hearts arrow-punctured.

    Blood breaks and bones bleed
    Sweeping black over rainbow shades
    Hearts leak sweetly
    And each eye drops an ocean.

    Harvest of children
    Mass murder on divine ground
    No defining lost nor found.
    Nowhere is everywhere.

    Desolate land
    Once home for thousands
    Until toy soldiers came and destroyed
    Everything.

    Their master; the blind commander
    Snugly wrapped in green-paper blankets
    Shooting words
    Spraying orders.

    We'll be the jack-in-the-box
    For your amusement.
    Under oppressive authority.
    He lacks meaning but his presence is unforgivable.

    Enjoy the silence of bangs and booms
    Before your head is blown,
    Snowflake scattered upon body-bag fields
    With everyone else.

    Toy soldiers watch, ready to swoop
    Carnage crammed into their carcasses.
    Remain eyeless and cold
    You'll survive the headlines;

    Bold-black on white echoes bullet wounds
    Ink rubbed onto skylines
    Scarring words into the world
    Reality turns fiction on this side of television.

    Edited honesty, an artificial war
    Blows up faces.
    We need to hear gunfire and split souls
    But we remain snug, wrapped up
    In paper-blanket ignorance.




    Submitted on 2007-10-30 21:18:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked the opening lines,they are really good,they just grabbed me and wanted me to read more.i enjoyed it very much,it fits well into the present moment with afghanistan, irak etc.
    war is horrible, (especially for the innocent)even if the tv cuts it,and shows the so-called triumphant flag waving parts. nice read
    bye gerry
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]



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