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    dots Submission Name: Aperture Sciencedots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 329/334/138
    Words: 282
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 149
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1767



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    dotsAperture Sciencedots
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    This was a triumph
    I'm making a note here
    HUGE SUCCESS
    It's hard to overstate my satisfaction
    Aperture Science

    we do what we must because we can
    for the good of all of us except for the ones who are dead
    but there's no sense crying over every mistake
    you just keep on trying until you run out of cake
    and the science gets done and you make a neat gun
    for the people who are still alive

    I'm not even angry
    I'm being so sincere right now
    even though you broke my heart and killed me
    and torn into pieces
    and threw every piece into a fire
    as they burned it hurt because I was so happy for you!
    Now these points of data make a wonderful line
    and we're out of beta, we're releasing on time
    so I'm glad I got burned
    Think of all the things we learned for the people that are still alive

    go ahead and leave me
    I think I prefer to stay inside
    maybe you'll find someone else to help you
    maybe black mesa
    that was a joke, haha, fat chance
    anyway this cake is great, it's so delicious and moist
    look at me still talking, when there's science to do
    when I look out there it makes me glad I'm not you
    I've experiments to run, there is research to be done
    on the people who are still alive

    and believe me I am still alive
    I'm doing science and I'm still alive
    I feel FANTASTIC and I'm still alive
    While you are dying I'll be still alive
    and when you're dead I'll be still alive
    STILL ALIVE, still alive




    Submitted on 2007-10-30 21:53:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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