HOLD MY HAND

Author: mimi ASL Info:    30/f/ny Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111 Words: 58

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HOLD MY HAND

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I wish you knew. Feel what I feel. Ache, tremble and sigh. Dazed till you lie Down deep inside. I wish you knew. It flickers and burns Hurts so good The fire from your kiss. It all comes down to this. I want to fall While holding your hand. Whisper and shout At the same time

Submitted on 2007-10-30 22:36:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Whoa the end totally wrapped it up well I loved the last line. Reminded me of my BF and of past BFs. All-in-All good write ~Karie

| Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]

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