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    dots Submission Name: HOLD MY HANDdots
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    Author: mimi
    ASL Info:    30/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597/390/111
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 1162
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 375



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    dotsHOLD MY HANDdots
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    I wish you knew.
    Feel what I feel.
    Ache, tremble and sigh.
    Dazed till you lie
    Down deep inside.
    I wish you knew.
    It flickers and burns
    Hurts so good
    The fire from your kiss.
    It all comes down to this.
    I want to fall
    While holding your hand.
    Whisper and shout
    At the same time




    Submitted on 2007-10-30 22:36:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Whoa the end totally wrapped it up well
    I loved the last line.

    Reminded me of my BF and of past BFs.

    All-in-All good write

    ~Karie
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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