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HOLD MY HAND


Author: mimi
ASL Info:    30/f/ny
Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111
Words: 58
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
Total Views: 1192
Average Vote:    4.0000
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NEEDS A BETTER TITLE


HOLD MY HAND



I wish you knew.
Feel what I feel.
Ache, tremble and sigh.
Dazed till you lie
Down deep inside.
I wish you knew.
It flickers and burns
Hurts so good
The fire from your kiss.
It all comes down to this.
I want to fall
While holding your hand.
Whisper and shout
At the same time




Submitted on 2007-10-30 22:36:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Whoa the end totally wrapped it up well
I loved the last line.

Reminded me of my BF and of past BFs.

All-in-All good write

~Karie
| Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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