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    dots Submission Name: Missingdots
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    Author: LucyDiamond
    ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 365/572/251
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 126
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    Description:
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    dotsMissingdots
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    Yellow is just not as
    bright as is used to be.
    It’s a sort of murky

    shade of trying and
    ‘almost-there’ type things.
    The sound of her voice

    used to be full of
    everything. But I
    don’t exactly hear it

    anymore, just like
    encouragements. I guess
    I’m deaf to the taste of

    cinnamon tea, too. Now,
    I’m not like I used to be.
    I’m a cheap version of

    my previous ‘me’. And don’t bother
    trying to brush my knee
    like it will leave an indent

    for weeks. I probably
    won’t even notice,
    dormant lover. Even before

    when nestling my face
    inside your embrace just so I
    could smell what was missing

    has never happened, now.




    Submitted on 2007-10-30 23:55:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This sounds like something Conor Oberst would write.

    "I’m a cheap version of

    my previous ‘me’."

    "And I'm never real, it's just a sketch of me"

    I don't know why that reminded of that but it did. And it is a compliment that you write like him by the way :)

    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by wovenwords | [ Reply to This ]



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