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    dots Submission Name: Auliedots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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       This is only the first part to a three part poem. Originally I was going to post it, but I decided not to...eh, oh well, I suppose, right?


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    dotsAuliedots
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    vodka burns and crimson sheets shift,
    the burning fingers gripping my hips,
    his scent is
    hot and cooling
    but her scent is sticking to him as well.
    -&- and it’s not fair as honey-coated lips
    life among the dead
    (-&-stuff like that cause poets seem to lie)
    arch and take within, yes he’s mine,
    sleeping next to him,
    I love you
    whispered meanlessly.

    ( I seem to forget
    addiction and methadone tasted lips
    are rehearsed)




    Submitted on 2007-10-31 00:31:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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