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    dots Submission Name: Immortality Spokendots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 367
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       I realized that after someone commented on this earlier, that at the end the repetition of the title is two entirely diferent words, and I want to point out, it was completely intentional.

    109 short lines...I know, such a put off. I hope it's worth it though.


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    dotsImmortality Spokendots
    -------------------------------------------


    i.
    I fall under this I have no control, please release me
    mind and body, soul owned and held,
    soon the promise that flesh will be served
    mastered and alive.
    By a god of lust,
    flesh pleaser
    (whispered words of control,
    from lips of poisoned lust)
    desire controlled and no one else arouses it
    taken and claimed
    as it’s own.

    today and tonight forever
    without my permission
    (lust whispered more lovely
    than love, dripped upon my flesh
    your mark)

    ii.
    beauty unhindered and innocence still intact
    a marvelous creature desired,
    wanted and rare

    taken without regard and marked for own purposes
    pleasing for body to rock and spasm
    with it’s first orgasm,
    spinning the world in colors of fire
    icy and burning passion
    (drenched here upon his body,
    his want for mine)
    craving my flesh.

    iii.
    disobeying orders
    to serve and be tasted
    an affair to have
    upon me
    upon sins
    lusting for grains of me against you
    sublime natures and primitive desires,
    bound by curse of lust

    iiiv.
    words exchanged, hates
    meaningless to snake
    body betrayed
    mind falling to control
    salvation lost in strangled cries
    not yours
    based upon the simple foundations:

    v.
    rested, fallen, and lost, ecstasy forgotten—temptation

    vi.
    craved, given freely the screams of a broken soul,
    metamorphing forms of pleasure
    rocked and shattered
    numbness setting and here
    weightless, boneless artwork melting in his hands,
    bones tasting sweeter
    in the arms of pleasure rocked

    vii.
    delicate precipice carved and dripped
    words echoed, breaking
    unity and slow grinding
    (inescapable grasp,
    your moans not lost upon my ears,
    only when your objections bleed)
    beginning in one moment

    viii.
    flames erupted from wet caverns
    will broken and rested exchanged
    dignity lost,
    everything
    burned paths of exotic,
    used addiction of passionate
    hate, parchedly drinking
    ambrosia forced
    to be tasted.

    ix.
    devoured without a hero,
    and given up without a fight
    pleasing atrophy.
    obey the will of your
    lover almost left
    without a soundless word
    (you wanted this
    without realizing
    the price of falling)
    warned by divinity

    x.
    and here remained performing skin tasting,
    dancing without passion or will,
    immorality spoken.




    Submitted on 2007-10-31 00:37:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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